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 **Presenters:** Amy
 
 **Description:**
-We need a beautiful Map to add to the new QGIS website. It would be amazing if the community could make and make and submit QGIS-themed maps. maps that are QGIS colors, 3d maps, amazing point cloud visualizations we want them all. Get together in this session to show off your map or make maps with us during the session. 
+We need beautiful Maps to add to the new QGIS website. We would love for the community to make and submit QGIS-themed maps. The Maps would be the QGIS colors and aesthetically pleasing. All map types are encouraged, including 3d maps and amazing point cloud visualizations we want them all. Get together in this session, where we will go through the QGIS aesthetic colors and themes. and To show off your map-making skills while making maps with us during the session. Share your screen and explain your data and map with the team in the meeting. 
 
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